Complete the Story موضوع حلوووو لايطوفكم

This Is Me · #1 (**permalink**) 03-11-2007, 02:50 PM

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Hi, All

In this subject the main goal is to improve our ways of writing, so the idea is to start with a paragraph of an incomplete story then, the person whose turn is next he/she have to complete the story with out putting an end to it in order, to give the next participant a chance to participate in the story. After any Participation, I’ll try to correct the mistakes that had been made and if I have done any mistakes don’t hesitate in correcting mine. The story will be ending at next Sunday and if I observe that the idea is useful and enjoyable to you I’ll start with another incomplete story. It’s really an effective way to know our minor errors in writing. [/align]

مرحبا للكل
في هذا الموضوع الهدف الأساسي هو تحسين طرق الكتابة لدينا, الفكرة هي البداية بفقرة لقصة غير مكتملة وبعدها يتم الزيادة عليها من قبل المشارك الذي يلي دون إنهاء القصة حتى يحصل المشارك التالي على فرصة للمشاركة في هذا الموضوع. بعد كل مشاركة, سأحاول تصحيح الأخطاء ولا تترددوا في تصحيح أخطائي إن وجدت. القصة ستنتهي في يوم الأحد المقبل وإذا لاحظت أن هذه الفكرة مفيدة وأحببتموها سوف أبدا بقصة غير مكتملة أخرى. هذه الطريقة فعالة لتجعلنا على علم بالأخطاء التي لا نلاحظها و نقع فيها أثناء الكتابة.

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[align=left] Ones upon time, in a great big farm there was a huge house in this house, there was a little family surrounded by love and happiness. The father of this family was named Josef, the mother her name is Sarah, and God blessed them with a very beautiful daughter they’ve named her Henna. Henna means the world to hear parents they’ve tried to give her all the things that she requested, lovely clothes, pretty jewelers, the best servants, and every thing that she dreamed of. Although, Hanna was a little pit spoiled but, she was a real good daughter that made her parents proud. …………………….Unfortunately the happiness of this family wasn’t eternal because one day
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زعيم الاحساس · #2 (**permalink**) 03-11-2007, 05:59 PM

hi , this is me
it is very nice idea , i like it

ok , let me start

Hanna went shopping . In her way shopping , she found a small box that
contained more than 10.000 $ . When she found that box next to a car ,she
picked it up and brought it immediatly to her room . Thier parents were watching
T.V. So , they saw their daughter carrying a box and her mother followed her . Her
mother entered Hanna's room and noticed the money in front of Hanna . Then she
asked "where did you bring it " i found it near by a car in town ,Hanna answered . In
that time her mother went down to Hanna's father and told him . Their daughter was
very sorry about what was happened . Her father went back with her to the place
that she found a box . A man was standing behind that car and wondering about
what happened to him . So , Hanna's father downed and told the man that her
daughter found his box next to his car ,and she took that box without intention. Then
that man thanked her , but her parents were angry and annoyed , finally Hanna promised
not to take anything again

i hope you like my invention story

اتمنى ان يعجبكم اختراعي للقصة ويعطيك العافية this is me
وبالتوفيق للجميع

This Is Me · #3 (**permalink**) 03-12-2007, 03:07 PM

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Thanks for the participation it was a great your imaginary story is great.
But, as all of as you did have some minor mistakes and I high lighted them in red for you.
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[align=left]Hanna went shopping. In her way shopping, she found a small box that
contained more than 10.000 $. When she found that box next to a car, she
picked it up and brought it immediately to her room. Her parents were watching
T.V. So, they saw their daughter carrying a box and her mother followed her. Her
mother entered Hanna's room and noticed the money in front of Hanna. Then, she
asked "where did you bring it?” I found it near by a car in town, Hanna answered. In
that time her mother went down to Hanna's father and told him. Their daughter was
very sorry about what was happened. Her father went back with her to the place
that she found a box. A man was standing behind that car and wondering about
what happened to him. So, Hanna's father downed and told the man that her
daughter found his box next to his car, and she took that box without intention. Then,
that man thanked her, but her parents were angry and annoyed, finally Hanna promised
not to take anything again.[/align]

زعيم الاحساس · #4 (**permalink**) 03-14-2007, 05:38 PM

thanks a lot this is me for the corrections

waiting the second story

all my wishes

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